Thursday, 30 April 2020

Writing

Below is a small piece of Amelias writing from today.

Poppy and Jasper, Poppy’s dog, are best friends. 
Poppy's dad is an inventor, he comes up with new and improved inventions to share
with the world but first he has to get them safety checked  and that's where poppy comes in. 


Poppy and her trusted companion Jasper,  test out her dad’s inventions.
So one day Poppy and Jasper went up up up in to the sky to test drive Poppy’s dad’s
new invention. It was an aircraft but then up, up, up  with them went a flying potato.
She couldn't believe her eyes. She completely froze letting go of the steering wheel and soon the
aircraft was out of control.  In about 40 seconds they crashed. 

Poppy was out for 1 minute or 2. Soon she woke from a faint noise of
a doctor yelling for assistants. He said don’t worry I’ll take good care of you.

By Amelia

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