Saturday, 27 July 2019

WEEK ONE TERM THREE

WOW here we are already into the 3rd term. We have had a fantastic beginning. 

Check out our wonderful writing below. It was based on a poem by James K. Baxter and is about Room 4 holidays. 



Margaret Mahy playground was usual enough, it had
A slide, climbing equipment, a flying fox and a
Sky over it, and it even had trampolines
I never went to. My friends and I did what kids
Do at big playgrounds play tag, creeper around
Avoiding other people, while keeping in 
Mind that the hungry taggers might be behind.
Having a fun time 
Doing nothing important. 
By Benjamin

The stadium was usual enough; It had
 A rugby field, tiered seating, a sky
Over it, and even some food vans
I never went to. My brothers, my dad and I
Did What boys do,
Watched the rugby, cheered as the Crusaders scored a try,
 Laughed as the Crusaders dodged the Jaguares,
Snacked on the new perky nana lumps.
Supporting our Crusaders
By Alexander

The riding park was usual enough it had 
Horses, paddocks, tracks, and jumps all around. Even a massive
Log jump I never go over. My friend Gabrielle and I did what horse crazy girls do. Riding in the freezing cold ran. Decorating the ponies manes with ribbon, dodging the birds and rabbits, jumping higher and higher, trying to beat the 90cm record mucking around 
Doing nothing important.
By Amelia

The mall was boring but I stayed in the car all the time, 
I was with my brother and my cousin 
we were on the bottom car park and we were on the phone. 
It was loud in the car park old rusty tractors were taking loud clanging trolleys, car lights flashing on and off and dusty dirt in the air
Doing nothing important
By Declan

My party was usual enough; it had 
Delicious party food, carefully wrapped presents, chocolatey chocolate cake (with strawberry icing), all the usual stuff. It even had chips that I 
never really ate. My friends and I did what good friends do-talk, watched a movie, played games, painted.
Doing something important.
By Anahera

Waikanae was usual enough it had
Birthdays to set up, tenpin bowling, cancelled flights and a gaming room I never went to. My mum, cousins and I bowled balls, destroyed the pins made loud thumps, dodged the all the people strolling around at the airport. Sped like rabbits shooting out the door on the train station. 
Doing nothing important.
By Josh

ALSO A huge thanks for the great birthday gifts and greetings from everyone.

4 comments:

  1. Cool writings :)

    (Michael Jia)

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  2. That part of the girls coming into the door was very noisy :)

    (Michael Jia)

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  3. I had so much fun writing our poems. They all sound great.
    #melika

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  4. I love Winter sports :)

    (Michael Jia)

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